By Somali K Chakrabarti
Murmuration of
starlings rising in unison
twisting and turning
in incredible patterns;
Balletic coordination!
© Somali K Chakrabarti
Tanka is a Japanese form of non-rhymed lyrical poem consisting of 5 lines. A tanka in English follows a short-long-short-long–long pattern.
‘Lei: A wreath for your soul‘, is a string of short poems reflecting on nature, life and emotions.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Lynn:)
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Beautiful as always…weaving picture and poem… 🙂
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Thank you Maremma 🙂
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The imagery which you create always out of words are far more touching than the images itself.
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Thank you Chaitali but honestly the images are often inspiration for the words. 🙂
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I’ve written about the very same thing as a Haiku 🙂
https://wordpress.com/post/allyonthefarm.wordpress.com/889
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Would love to read it.
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Oops! Try this link http://tinyurl.com/z8fst7k to my Haiku on starlings! 😉
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Lovely Tornado indeed . Can’t comment on your post from cell. Will comment later from comp. Thanks for sharing.
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Yes yes have you seen a flock of little birds do that.. It is mesmerising and wowow a beautiful scene..
In our village we had two small dunes right in the end of our fields and in evenings there use to be the sparrow that would flock mullions and then on a slight noise they would all fly in a unison..
Beautiful…..
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Bikramjit you are lucky to have lived in a place where you have seen this. I have only seen seagulls flying in a flock. When i see such beautiful pictures, it leaves me awestruck so I can only imagine how beautiful it must be to see it.
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Such a nice one! The moments I saw the image, my mind uttered the word – patterns. I was glad to read it in the poem! 🙂
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Thank you Prakash 🙂
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Really beautiful. 🙂
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Thanks Nitin 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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If only the human race learned teamwork from the starlings!
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Exactly that’s what I had in mind while writing the word coordination 🙂 Thank you Lata.
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A fine poem.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful and informative! New terms there
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Thank you Alka
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fantastic pic and beautiful poem Somali.
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Thank you Sharmistha 🙂
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Balletic is just the perfect word to describe the beautiful co-ordination of the birds…wonderfully penned… 🙂
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Thank you Maniparna 🙂
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Nice 🙂
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Thanks Rupam 🙂
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Loved this.. And the one of your owl… Lovely poetry xxx
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Thank you sue. Loved your owl too. 🙂
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🙂 xxx
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